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When You're Gone... ch 1 by =SasukeUchihaFangirlx:iconSasukeUchihaFangirlx:



When your gone...
A Love Story.

_.:=Please Come Back Home=:._
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“N-Naruto…just…bring Sasuke back okay, alright…?”
Sakura sighed as she watched the five ninja leave the leaf village.
Naruto…Kiba…Shikamaru…Chouji…Neji…please….just bring him home…
She hugged herself as she watched the boys walk slowly out of site, off to retrieve her lost love.
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As Sakura slowly walked back to her apartment, she hung her head, holding back the tears that so desperately wanted to fall. She could feel the eyes of random passers looking at her, but no one said a word to the girl. Most knew not of what happened. Sakura did not wish her ordeal with anyone either.
She just wanted her Sasuke back.
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When Sakura eventually reached her room, she dropped her things at the doorway, kicking the door shut behind her. She slowly staggered to her room, using various walls as balance. When she managed to get to her room, she closed the door silently and collapsed onto her bed, blanket wrapping her in a fluffy embrace. She took her pillow and hugged it to her chest, bursting into tears.
“Where’d you go…? I miss you so…It seems like it’s been forever … since you’ve been gone…” Sakura sung quietly, tears flowing freely.
“Please come back home…”
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:

Author's Comments

alright! my first fanfic posted anywhere! *and the croud cheers!*
story:
Sasuke was kidnapped and the 5 leaf ninja went to go get him back. you all know that. but what was Sakura doing in that time?
Well, Sakura blames herself for what happened to Sasuke and..yeah stuff happeneds....lemme know if you guys like this...i had this idea about a week ago, litterally JUST wrote out this chapter tonight...so....please tell me if i should continue!! :hug:
comments and critique is GREATLY apperciated! :highfive:
PS: got the song words from here
[link]

PPS: [link] ~ next chapter

Comments


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:iconkawaiinaru-chan:
Fo a NaruSasu peraps?
:iconsasukeheart:
this is really cute. Where did sasuke go? he has 2 come back or i'll cry.

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this is what i want to do to time
:fork:
but it seems time holds the fork
:iconiluvsasusaku365411:
come back sasuke to sakura or to me(about to cry)
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
NaruSasu? i dont think so..
its gonna be a NaruSaku i can tell you that much...

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
heh...:sweatdrop: i dont think hes gonna come back...he....hehe..o_o
cause this is when he gets stolen by the sound village? and naruto and people go to get him back...where they are in the show right now...
its about its about what Sakuras doing...and yeah...some stuff happeneds...
but i may bring back Sasuke by popular demand =D

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
^_^
im glad you like it? xD
but i didnt plan on bringing Sasuke back, but i may bring him back by popular demand..
and right now he is at popular demand...=P

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:iconsasukeheart:
ok that sounds good. STUPID SOUND NINJA!!!!!!!!!!

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this is what i want to do to time
:fork:
but it seems time holds the fork
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
:shakefist: stupid sound ninja!!!!!

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:iconsasukeheart:
lets go kill them with fangirl power.

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this is what i want to do to time
:fork:
but it seems time holds the fork
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
:teamwork:
yes!!!
fangirl army!!!

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”

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