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When You Come Home...ch. 34 by =SasukeUchihaFangirlx:iconSasukeUchihaFangirlx:



When You Come Home…
The aftermath of the love story.

{[[--Every Second Time Counted--]]}
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"S-sakura...!" Naruto's eyes were wide as he stared at the girl, barley able to comprehend what had just happened.
"its...its just so hard, Naruto..." she said, wringing her hands in her lap. “I…I just can’t-” she hiccupped as she began to cry harder.
She did care about both of them. She really did.
But being forced to choose between them made her wish that she didn’t have feelings for either. The girl slowly leaned forward and covered her head with her hands, fingers laced, as she began to sob.
“S-Sakura…”
The blonde could barley moved.
Sakura had kissed him.
Sakura had /kissed him/.
But the thing he couldn’t wrap his head around was that /Sakura/ had kissed /him/.
The boy’s mind was racing. ‘Yeah, Sakura promised me. But…but why did she kiss me all of a sudden?! And…why is she crying now…?’
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“Sa-…Sakura…”
“I’m sorry, Naruto…! I‘m trying okay!?” she shook as she sobbed.  
He didn’t want to see her like this anymore. Ever so slowly, he sat down next to her, slowly putting his arm around her. She sniffled as she gently brought her head up to look at the boy. His blue eyes looked so sad as he stared at her.
“As long as you don’t cry anymore…I…I can wait!” He tried to speak with a smile, but it didn’t work too well. Sakura slowly leaned into him, causing them to fall over, her on top of him. The pink haired girl snuggled into the blonde’s shirt as her tears slowly seized. Naruto was shocked at first, but slowly relaxed with her in his arms.
The minuets passed by like hours as the two secretly enjoyed every second time counted.
But a sudden sound made both of the ninjas nearly jump out of their skin. There was a knock at the door.
“Sakura? Can I come in…?”
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Author's Comments

YUS!!! ITS WHAT YOUVE ALLLLLL BEEN WAITING FOR! ^_^
HIZZAH!
**is gonna be shanked for this chapter so will continue saying nice things**
soooo0o many ideas to credit!
ideas via:
:iconkasumiwolfdemon:
:iconchiluvr:
:iconsasusaku-darkness:
:iconwushy-chan:
if your idea wasnt in here and i said your name, dun worry......i said your name for a reason....:ninjaplot:
and ive been dying to post like 4 PICTURES i made, but dA is being dumb~~ it uploads my fanfic in less than 30 sec, and when i try a picture, after 5 min it says "nuuu too much~~~" TT_TT
got an idea? gimme. ^_^
got a comment? post it! good OR bad! ^_^

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:icongivehugs4all:
O.o OMG!!!! RUNNNNNN!!!! lolz!!
great job! Can't wait for the next chappie!

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:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
:bow: thank you!
:glomp:

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:icongivehugs4all:
welcome!

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:icongunsouru:
yaaay cutie ^^

I loved it

Oh noes Sasuke wants to enter D:

well, you already did Sakura kiss Naruto, I'm happy with that, at least she has feelings for him too ^^

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holly shit D: [link]
I LOL at the LOL
"You sir! no one is in the chair. come on, come on....sweeney's...waiting...I want you bleeders" :devil:
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
yay! im happy if my readers are happy! ^_^
:glomp:
thank you~

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:iconsasusaku-darkness:
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH! What's gonna happen!!! i'm so excited!! :excited:

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SASUKE!! :glomp:

NaruSaku :bleh:

SasuIno :bleh: x100,000,000,000,000

SasuKarin :puke:

ShikaTema :nod:

ShikaIno :nod: WILL NEVER HAPPEN!!

NaruHina :love: yeps!

SASUSAKU!!! :glomp: my all time favorite couple!
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
^_^
i aim to please! ^_^

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
:iconheart-broken01:
YAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LUV IT!!!!!
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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My heart was broken once & it will not be broken again
:icongunsouru:
you're welcome, but you can't make all happy.

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holly shit D: [link]
I LOL at the LOL
"You sir! no one is in the chair. come on, come on....sweeney's...waiting...I want you bleeders" :devil:
:iconsasukeuchihafangirlx:
:bow:
thank you so much! ^_^

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”

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