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Catching Butterflies - ch 1 by *SasukeUchihaFangirlx:iconSasukeUchihaFangirlx:



“Hinata-chan? Are you alright?” The brunette asked, knocking on the girls bedroom door. “You were acting so strangely toda-”
“N-Neji…r-really…I’m okay…!”
“May I come in?”
“Ah!! I-I-…Uh….s-s-sure…”
Cautiously, the Hyuuga slid open his cousins door, finding her scrambling to pick up papers off the floor. “What’s all this?” he asked, leaning down the pick up a piece, but Hinata quickly snatched it from his hands.
“N-n-nothing!”
Neji simply watched as the raven haired girl tried to stack the possibly hundreds of papers into a small shoe box. Slamming the lid down on top of it (the box couldn’t even close properly; there were so many papers), she slid the box under her bed and looked down at her lap. “I-It’s nothing…Nii-san, really…” Hinata trailed off as her face deepened in color.
“Hinata, I-”
“Please…d-don’t ask-”
“You missed one…”
Her head shot up to see Neji looking down at a paper at the end of the girl’s bed. Hinata dived forward to retrieve it, but it was already in his hand. She sat there, horrified, as she watched Neji’s clear purple eyes slowly scan the page, drinking in it’s words.
Hinata stared at the floor, her horrid blush not leaving her face, until the paper was returned to her.
“A...love letter?”
The girl looked ashamed.
“All of those papers…unsent love letters?” Neji lightly shook his head. “You’re still so shy after all this time…”
Hinata watched as her cousin slowly left her bedroom, a gentle smile on his lips. “Those butterflies in your stomach can be overpowering, can’t they…?”

As Neji walked into town to meet with his team, he couldn’t stop thinking about the event that had just occurred. He knew his cousin had a crush on a number one hyperactive knuckle-head ninja… but enough to write so many love letters he would never receive?


Catching the butterflies in my stomach so that once I put them in my heart shaped box I can give them to you...

~<3~
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:iconohjoyplz:
Like, OHMAHGWAD! It's another chapter-by-chapter fiction!

and i came up with that snazzy quote :3

this picture fits this so well and kinda inspired me to make it...:blushes: [link]

yeah...i dont know whats going on either... o_o;;
heh..deja vu with the last story, ne? x3

you know whats gonna happen?
Me neither!
lets find out together, okay?
:icongaaraishappyplz:

what do you think of it so far? ^^;
please comment and enjoy! ^_^ :glomp:

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~WhitewingedAngel13:iconWhitewingedAngel13: Apr 20, 2008, 6:09:47 PM
WOOT! :hug: another chapter by chapter!!!!!! Sounds very interesting :hug:
Love Ya Lots!
~Jess

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I kinda wish this whole "Love" thing was a myth.....
*LlamaDrama:iconLlamaDrama: Apr 20, 2008, 6:10:59 PM
OOOH!!! DATS COOL!!
I YUVS IT!
IT HAS NEJI-KUN!!
NEJI-KUN!
XD

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:jester: i am a crazy joker fangirl...got a problem with that? :jester:
I play the Alto Saxophone and i'm Freakin FIRST CHAIR!!!
what have you done with your life!? XD
*SasukeUchihaFangirlx:iconSasukeUchihaFangirlx: Apr 20, 2008, 6:13:16 PM
Hehe thank you! ^_^ :glomp:

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
*SasukeUchihaFangirlx:iconSasukeUchihaFangirlx: Apr 20, 2008, 6:14:02 PM
youre a Neji-fangirl? o_o
eh...well....im still debating whether hes gonna be important in the fiction or not... x3
thank you! ^_^

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
~itachiuchihapwns:iconitachiuchihapwns: Apr 20, 2008, 6:23:27 PM
MOOOOAAR! I love it! i want mor e!

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*SasukeUchihaFangirlx:iconSasukeUchihaFangirlx: Apr 20, 2008, 6:25:15 PM
^w^ im glad you like it!
the next chapter is maybe...half way done? im still trying to figure out whats going on myself...x3

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All young people say it, “No matter what I do I won’t descend into nothing. It’s because I’m just living in this wonderful world!” They all say “It’s so I don’t forget all those truths and lies.”
~itachiuchihapwns:iconitachiuchihapwns: Apr 20, 2008, 6:35:33 PM
thats ok, i really like it! mainly cuz the naruhina relationship is alot like me + my girlfriend.

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~givehugs4all:icongivehugs4all: Apr 20, 2008, 7:18:59 PM
AWESOME!!! YAYYYYYYY!!! Love it! Is it naruhina!???

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~iPengu:iconiPengu: Apr 20, 2008, 7:38:08 PM
YAY. -goingtoread-
~DragonsAnimeAngel:iconDragonsAnimeAngel: Apr 20, 2008, 9:37:05 PM
yay :aww:
i like it! hinata's one of my fav girl characters... :glomp:
nice quote :D creative......
pretty picture too :)
great job!! >w<

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Listen to Your Heartbeat, & Dance. :heart:
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~~I have always wished...
for the dream to become reality
and for the reality to turn into a dream~~~~ :frail: